Career Goals – UCLA (Before & After)
This post examines the transformation of a UCLA MBA application essay, showcasing how a lengthy 442-word draft was refined into a concise 249-word submission that meets requirements while maintaining...
Strengths and Weakness Essay -INSEAD (Before & After)
This post examines the transformation of an INSEAD MBA application essay, demonstrating how a verbose 649-word personal statement was skillfully edited into a powerful 500-word submission that meets...