Posted on March 6, 2012

Career Goals Essay

All business schools require applicants to write a Personal statement or Goals essay in which they discuss their goals and ambitions as they pertain to the MBA degree of the target school’s particular program.

What should I write in a 'Goals' essay?

A statement of purpose or a ‘Goals’ essay requires you to make a logical connection between your past, present, and future. This means you need to tell a story that connects your past (past work-experience), present (your need for an MBA from your target school to achieve your goals, and your future (goals and objectives). The Schools want to see that you have a clear plan/vision for the future and you have the ability to convince them of the same by telling your story that is not only clear and compelling but also reveals your personal and professional attributes.

Goals essay needs to be approached in different ways as per the specifications of the essay prompt and the word limit specified by your target school.

However, a typical ‘goals’ essay should have the following structure:

Structure of a typical Goals Essay:

Past: Begin your essay with a story/ event/ life experience that reflects a passion for your chosen field e.g. marketing or finance or any other field. Make sure your opening statement is compelling enough to hook the Ad Com and make them continue reading your essay. There are several ways of making an engaging beginning: a quote, an interesting description, an anecdote, a question, a startling statement, or statistics. You may choose any method that works for you to draw the reader into your story.

The following is an example of an engaging beginning that hooks the reader with a real-life example/anecdote:

"Surprised to find that the price of Mandarin comic books in Canada was three times that in Taiwan, I was curious to know the reasons for this huge price difference. This curiosity developed an interest in business while I was still in high school. After high school, I went back to Taiwan to do my bachelor studies and accomplished  two Bachelor’s degrees, one in applied linguistics and another in international trade."

After drawing the reader's attention by your story of passion,  provide details about how you have pursued your interest/passion and progressed along your career path these 3-4 years (or whatever your work experience is). Be specific in explaining how you have risen in positions/ responsibilities and salary to illustrate that your abilities are recognized and rewarded by your company. (about 30-35% of the essay)

Future: Now explain how your past experience has shaped your future goals and objectives, and what your plans are for the future. Be clear and decisive for short-term goals, even if you are not 100% sure. Show that you have put some thought into it. For example, if you are a career enhancer and your short term goal is to rise to the next level in your current company, state that precisely, or if you are a career changer and your objective is to learn new skills through MBA so you can change your career path, be articulate about it.

After explaining your short-term goals, go ahead and discuss your long-term goals. It is ok to be broader and more idealistic for long-term goals, but explain steps (A to B to C to make sure there is a logical connection between short-term and long-term goals). That is, explain how you see yourself moving from your short-term goal to long-term vision, making sure there is a logical connection between short-term and long-term goals. For example, you should not say that your long-term goal is to be CEO of XYZ company if your experience, current skills set, and short-term goals do not at all seem to be leading to that direction. (about 25-30% of the essay)

Present: After having discussed your future goals, explain how an MBA fits in the puzzle of the grand scheme of your career path. In other words, elaborate on why you believe that an MBA is the next logical step in your career path. Be specific when explaining how certain specific skills acquired during the MBA will bring you closer to the fulfillment of your goals. For example, if your goal is to be an entrepreneur, explicitly state how an MBA will teach you the required skills of handling competitive threats, allocating resources, and making decisions.

Also, explain why now is the right time for you is to do an MBA for further advancement in your career. Most schools specifically want to know ‘why MBA now?' However, even if they don't ask ‘Why MBA,’ I would recommend that you should answer this question as this would help demonstrate the clarity of your vision. (about 25-30% of the essay)

Why Target School? Once you have satisfactorily answered ‘Why MBA?’ and ‘Why MBA now?’, your next step is to explain 'why target school.' Discuss how you will use their resources to achieve your goals? Remember, schools always want to hear in what ways their MBA program will help you achieve your career objectives. (10-15% of the essay)

When the School asks 'Why We?' When the schools specifically ask you why you are interested in them, you need to provide a detailed explanation (depending on the word-limits specified by them) of how their specific resources will help you meet your objective. You may refer to a conversation with a student or a professor which will not only make your essay an interesting and engaging read but will also validate your genuine enthusiasm for these schools. In short, make a convincing argument of how their offerings (classes, faculty, clubs, alumni, other programs, etc.) are closely related to your goals. Go online, visit the campus, attend classes, talk to professors, students, and alumni, and discuss your experiences of visiting classes, programs, professors, if you can.

Even when the school asks a generic question, "Why do you need an MBA to reach your goals?" It is, in fact, also asking you, "Why do you need an MBA from our school?" and “How will you use our resources to achieve your goals?" Therefore, it still makes sense to make a brief statement about your interest and need for their specific offerings.

Contribution to the target School: Often, a school will ask applicants what they will bring to their MBA program if they are selected as students. In this case, you can refer to such possible contributions as participation or leadership in a particular club or student organization, in classroom discussions, or teamwork. You can also state that your international background would bring a global perspective to teams or course work, or your personal characteristics such as humor or enthusiasm will facilitate bonding between classmates or team groups. Even if the school doesn’t ask you to discuss your contribution, you can still mention (if space permits) what value you will add to the school and why you are a good match for their program?

Summing up, address the ‘Goals’ question by making logical connections between your past (past experience), future (future goals and objectives), and present (need of an MBA). Explain how your personal and professional experiences have shaped your goals, how an MBA from your target school would help you achieve your goals, and how you will add significant value to the school with your skills and experience. Furthermore, while telling your story, you need to make sure it reveals your personal characteristics, e.g. leadership, persistence, intelligence, creativity, diligence, integrity, and ability to work in teams, etc. Lastly, and most importantly, since schools word their 'Goals' question differently based on what they are looking for in their potential students, you need to make sure to structure and modify details of your story as per the essay prompt.

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