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4 MBA Admits (Haas, UCLA, USC, UCI) With Scholarships: Ashish’s Journey

Posted on April 28, 2025
Growing up in a military family, Ashish imbibed values of leadership, discipline, and camaraderie early on. After graduating in the top 5% of his class from Savitribai Pune University in Civil Engineering, he worked at a construction company for 1.5 years. Eager to deepen his technical knowledge, Ashish moved to the US to pursue a…
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Posted on April 15, 2025
NAME Address: ; Phone Number: ; E-mail: NAME OF COMPANY, CITY, STATE, COUNTRY Senior Marketing Associate June 2020– Present Developed and executed online and offline marketing campaigns that drove an average 4% top line growth for the KFC brand Collaborated with the top 2 food delivery platforms in the UAE and implemented several in-house delivery…
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Resume #2 (Before & After)

Posted on April 15, 2025
This post examines the transformation of an engineering professional's resume, highlighting effective resume optimization strategies for MBA applications. The comparison reveals how a cluttered format was refined into a more strategic document that maintains the candidate's impressive technical achievements while improving readability and impact. Key improvements include better organization of work experience and education sections,…
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Resume # 1 (Before & After)

Posted on April 15, 2025
This post showcases the transformation of a marketing professional's resume, demonstrating effective resume optimization techniques. The comparison reveals how a cluttered format was restructured into a clean, achievement-focused document that maintains all key professional accomplishments while improving readability. Notable improvements include stronger action verbs, more specific quantifiable results, expanded detail on notable projects, and better…
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Strengths and Weakness Essay -INSEAD (Before & After)

Posted on April 15, 2025
This post examines the transformation of an INSEAD MBA application essay, demonstrating how a verbose 649-word personal statement was skillfully edited into a powerful 500-word submission that meets requirements. The comparison highlights effective storytelling techniques that preserve the applicant's compelling journey from poverty to educational achievement while addressing both strengths and weaknesses authentically. Explore real…
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Career Goals – UCLA (Before & After)

Posted on April 15, 2025
This post examines the transformation of a UCLA MBA application essay, showcasing how a lengthy 442-word draft was refined into a concise 249-word submission that meets requirements while maintaining impact. The before-and-after comparison highlights effective editing techniques that preserve the applicant's powerful story about creating an employee wellness initiative following a colleague's burnout-related accident.  …
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